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The Adventures of Peter Ratsi: Chapter 1

Posted by John on August 10, 2013 in My Stories |

Chapter 1 – THE BOY HOUSE

BY JOHN SANTIAGO

Once apon a time, there lived a boy called Peter ratsi. Peter was greedy and selfish, that’s why he was walking in the deep forest with nobody around. While Peter was walking in the deep dark forest, he noticed that a shimmering light shined nearby. Even though he was greedy and selfish, Peter was also curious and ran straight to the light. Suddenly, he slipped and tumbled down into a narrow path. As he walked, his eyes met a beautiful shimmering house. The house was full of gold. He hid the gold behind a big oak tree and as quick as a flash, Peter zoomed inside the beautiful house and bumped into something. As he stepped up, Peter saw a monster holding a wand. He tried to run away but he was weary and tired from zooming and tumbling. Instead of capturing Peter, the monster set a curse on Peter. He began to shift shape. He felt another body flowing in him. Suddenly he turned into the bright shimmering house itself. The monster (who was actually a monster teacher) said that when he learns to not be greedy or selfish or have too much curiosity, he will be relished. As he was a house, he thought what he had done and learned that it is not good to have too much curiosity and be greedy and selfish. He also learned that friends are better than just walking around in the deep dark forest or woods or anywhere else on your own. Meanwhile, back at the ratsi house. Mrs. Ratsi and Mr. Ratsi were looking for Peter. Of course Peter was a house and a lonely house he was until…

TO BE CONTINUED!

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